WWW: It's an excellent feature of this that you have got quotes from the costume director and the make-up artist - that makes this really strong in terms of mise-en-scene. EBI: Cinematography is not detailed enough here, with that all important focus on the first five minutes. Be really thorough with each aspect of cinematography (at least ONE reference to SHOT,ANGLE, MOVEMENT,EDIT, Also, you need to refer to the audience more – what is the effect of the technique that you are explaining? How does it set the audience up for being curious to watch the rest of the film? Atmosphere. Mood. Tension. Humour. Drama etc.
Well done for some good work here - I NEED TO SEE YOUR RE-DRAFTED FILM ANALYSIS, YOUR STORYBOARDS AND YOUR SCRIPT – POSTED ON THIS BLOG PLEASE - BY THE END OF THE WEEK PLEASE. Well done on all your hard work this term.
WWW: It's an excellent feature of this that you have got quotes from the costume director and the make-up artist - that makes this really strong in terms of mise-en-scene.
ReplyDeleteEBI: Cinematography is not detailed enough here, with that all important focus on the first five minutes.
Be really thorough with each aspect of cinematography (at least ONE reference to SHOT,ANGLE, MOVEMENT,EDIT, Also, you need to refer to the audience more – what is the effect of the technique that you are explaining? How does it set the audience up for being curious to watch the rest of the film? Atmosphere. Mood. Tension. Humour. Drama etc.
Well done for some good work here - I NEED TO SEE YOUR RE-DRAFTED FILM ANALYSIS, YOUR STORYBOARDS AND YOUR SCRIPT – POSTED ON THIS BLOG PLEASE - BY THE END OF THE WEEK PLEASE.
ReplyDeleteWell done on all your hard work this term.